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Bonjour,
Je préfère le numero 3.
Mounzer
Posted by: mounzer noaman | Thursday, August 01, 2024 at 12:39 PM
Kristin, a friend told me about your blog and forwarded your email to view. I enjoy it so much, having visited Paris and Lille several times. My niece is studying the language of France so I just forwarded your email to her.
Kristin, in the future, if you would like to use one of my watercolor/ink paintings for a book cover, you are welcome to do so. To view them go to deannajaugstetter.com, Click on WORKS, then click on Parisian Fine Art Prints. There are additional paintings in my PARISIAN SERIES collection.
Sincerely,
Deanna Jaugstetter
Posted by: Deanna Jaugstetter | Thursday, August 01, 2024 at 01:57 PM
Hi, Kristi,
Congratulations on your new book in the works! I'll be excited to read it. I definitely think the cover should be number 7, because both of the photos are very appealing and balanced, not too busy.
Most importantly, whichever cover you choose, I think it is imperative NOT to have it say 2024. This is because people are shallow, and in a few months when it is 2025, they may feel like it is yesterday's news to buy a book that states it is about 2024. Of course it is silly, but that is the reality of how people choose things to read. Once they have the book, it will be apparent that the year you are writing about was 2024, but you don't want to lose future sales to folks who may feel that the information or your experiences might be stale in 2025 or 2027. We know it will all be forever fresh and universal!
Posted by: Ellen A | Thursday, August 01, 2024 at 02:47 PM
I prefer No. 1 cover. It grabs your attention and MAKES you look at it. The others are lovely WHEN you look at them, but No. 1 simply makes you look. And then rewards you with a visceral message from France.
Posted by: Anna Johnston | Thursday, August 01, 2024 at 04:55 PM
I like a few but as Anna said number 1 got my attention initially (in the small picture). Number 4 was a close second. Good luck/ bonne chance!
Posted by: Catherine W D | Thursday, August 01, 2024 at 05:09 PM
I also prefer #1. I don't think I can put it as elegantly as Anna above, but that cover conveys serenity and clarity and leaves you with a feeling of peace! The others have the word 'bubble' over the pictures which I find cluttered and distracting.
Julie Figures
Posted by: Julie Figures | Thursday, August 01, 2024 at 05:14 PM
I prefer #1. Easy to read quickly. Also, I agree, don't include the number 2024. It will date your book. Think of Peter Mayle's book "A Year in Provence." We have no idea what year he is referring to, but it still sounds interesting.
Posted by: Laurie Moone | Thursday, August 01, 2024 at 05:23 PM
As the owner of all of your previous books I am so pleased to hear that a new one will soon be available. I like all of the covers, but prefer either 1 or 3. As the author the final decision has to be yours and I am sure we will love whichever one you choose. Best wishes, Moira.
Posted by: MOIRA MCKEEVER | Thursday, August 01, 2024 at 05:57 PM
Putting a book together is lots of work! (Speaking as a book editor, not a writer.) You have lots of fans, so it will no doubt do well. It's very wise of you to ask for a "reader" to help you correct errors. New eyes will see things you don't. I agree with others that you don't need (or want) the year on the cover. Your preface or introduction can make it clear what year the stories are about. Good luck!
Posted by: Janet | Thursday, August 01, 2024 at 07:23 PM
The cover should definitely be Number 7. It is the most representative of daily life in France!
Posted by: Rose Hardman | Thursday, August 01, 2024 at 10:31 PM
I like the sharp contrast and readability of no 8, but would prefer the photo to take most of the space and shrink the illustration to be a thin border. No 3 is also eye-catching. No 6 is nice too.
As an author, some recommendations:
1. Many readers will be looking at a small image on a phone, so using a single photo is easier to see and understand.
2. The role of the cover is to instantly communicate what type of book it is. The image of the cobblestone street says "France" to the average foreigner. The water, although pretty, does not.
Posted by: Sara | Friday, August 02, 2024 at 12:06 AM
I prefer #4 because it is a typical, charming French scene and has a lovely color palette.
Posted by: Lauren Golden | Friday, August 02, 2024 at 01:58 AM
Hi Kristi,
As some of the people have stated, one fantastic photo is better than several. It will capture people’s interest. As to the subject matter, yes, cobble stones represent France as well as tiny streets, but the photo should pull you in. You have taken some really incredible photos, but I’m not seeing them here. What represents La Ciotat and the area? Also may I suggest a title that works with the photo and does not sit on top and obscures the image. I also agree with leaving the year off of the cover. You can put it on the title page or dedication page.
Of course, this is your book and it has to relate to you, say something about you and not us. So congratulations on your next book.
Peace, Kathleen
Posted by: Kathleen | Friday, August 02, 2024 at 04:46 AM
Bonjour Kristi!
The reason I was drawn to number one was because I immediately thought of the little boat your family bought in your new home port, La Ciotat. Is there any reason you can’t use one of your beautiful photographs that you took of your boat after having it painted. You are not only a great writer, but also an incredible photo artist…also, if you’re comfortable with sharing, I would like to know how your mom is doing now that she was finally able to get all of her paperwork in order and able to go to the hospital. I’ve been thinking about her and praying she is doing well. I look forward to your new book…and I’m proud of you for doing things on your own terms and timeline.💜
Posted by: Lorinda Busby | Friday, August 02, 2024 at 05:35 AM
For me No 1 has it because it is restful, speaks of holiday with the blue water and the vigorous shady umbrella pine and is easy to read, suggesting light entertaining fodder for les vacances. But like the best fait maison food your offerings always come from home and offer real nourishment. Thankyou.
Posted by: Briony Jones | Friday, August 02, 2024 at 06:09 AM
When I squint my eyes and peer through my lashes, as I have to do until I find my glasses or before my morning cafe au lait, #1 is the one that jumps out at me; but then, any scene of beautiful blue waters grabs my heart immediately. I believe that it could be a very close tie with #5, though, if the orange banner were removed; for me it is pretty jarring. The photo is absolutely stunning - I think that the suggestion of a road being traveled is a wonderful metaphor for your scenes from a French life.
Best of luck and love!
Posted by: Paula E Doody | Friday, August 02, 2024 at 09:37 AM
Hello, I was a Creative Director in Advertising with the big Int’l firms. I strongly recommend cover #1. It is bold, clean, timeless (but delete 2024). The year should be irrelevant, it should be something that you want to read in 10 or 15 years from now… And most of us do not want to be reading old books… We want to be reading current books. Also, in tests, visuals that depict holiday like scenes… Like the water and the boats, out pull the results of more conventional visuals.
A bank offering a loan showing a holiday style visual out pulls a DIY project, yet the money lent went to more practical use. Some of the cover designs are a bit ‘dated’’ in terms of typeface and design. Good luck!!!!
Posted by: Beth Craig | Friday, August 02, 2024 at 02:50 PM
I love #5 because it takes me down one of the so typically French streets like those you have taken us down so many times in your wonderful photos. That said, I am pulled by the blue water in #1. So #5 be more relative to your stories, but #1 packs an alluring punch.
Posted by: Linda | Saturday, August 03, 2024 at 03:52 PM
I am not an author or an editor, just a reader but...
I prefer no. 1 as it is very eye-catching.
Number 3 would be my second choice and all the others I find to be of old style fotos.
I agree with many other comments above and would definitely leave out the year 2024, it will outdate the book for selling purposes and detracts from the title of the book.
Hope this helps!
Posted by: Nicky B | Sunday, August 04, 2024 at 01:33 AM
Number # 1 gets my vote without any hesitation! Best wishes with this latest book "in the works". There are many of your readers who are looking forward to its publication.
Posted by: Cynthia P. Lewis | Sunday, August 04, 2024 at 03:15 AM
I voted for #3. I hesitated between #1, #3 or #5.
I agree with those readers asking to delete 2024.
Courage et bonne chance !!
Posted by: Irene | Sunday, August 04, 2024 at 03:48 PM
Bonjour Kristen!
For me it’s a tie between #1 & #3 . I would agree to remove placement of the year.
Both 1 & 3 look current & are eye catching. . The other covers have a more retro palette & style.
I actually prefer the multi-view cover of # 3 .
Bonne Chance!
Evelyne
Posted by: Eve Taylor | Monday, August 05, 2024 at 06:29 AM
There are no bad choices for the cover design, but I think #3 best conveys the variety of your story themes. I am confident there will be inspiration for everyone in your new book - because you write about so many different topics and always tie the stories back to a universal truth that transcends the "plot"!
Posted by: Jane Johnson | Monday, August 05, 2024 at 10:09 PM
Needs to be a big photo, so 1 and 5 both stand out. I agree, the year is irrelevant so drop it. I lean toward 5 because the colors meld so well.
Posted by: Larry Mason | Tuesday, August 06, 2024 at 12:20 AM